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a few grammer and spelling mistakes, i believe, but relatively simple, cute and, all around, clean.

um...fix all your grammer and spelling and confused homophones and then we'll talk. i can't...exactly...get it now, and i'm dreadfully sorry.

by the way, avoid saying "honey" and other pet names... or, at least, just add commas before and after it since it is, after all, an interjection or something of ...

the second line is too long. could you possibly shorten it? it's sweet, but it wasn't moving. try to use resources of imagery or poetic style. these are very deep ...

this was cute and funny, despite lack of structure, rhythm, imagery, poetic style...er.... well, i'm not exactly sure it was even a poem but it kept my interest and i ...

i don't know you, but hey, i love you! (but just to tell you, toads don't exist. it's all a lie.)

a tad bit shallow, but passing and relatively true for any middle school drama. not much imagery, metaphors, etc. but just didn't strike me. it was rather appearance based which ...

very good! i, for one, could never write a limerck. rhyming and syllables are tolerable in my book, but never favored. just like a limerck is supposed to be, these ...

hahah that was the whole point - i know it was overrused. eh, thanks, though - really. it did help me

oh yes haha i get it now wow i feel stupid us poets, looking too far into things deep apologies. according to what you said, though, this is actually quite ...

nevermind. my buddist friend just told me. amazing, really.

despite the many spelling mistakes, it was great. you have a perfect rhythm that is very fun to read aloud, and it also had a point - it wasn't some ...

i printed this poem out. i loved it. i write you more later on a keyboard that has a backsapece backspace key. haha

while, of course, this poem was not top notch (it was a free write, after all), it was well written for exposing your feelings. i always understood your point of ...

this is a uselesss comment, and for that i apologize. but this was rather...uh... wonderful. i absolutely loved this. it really moved me and i loved every line of it.